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Kitless Character Creation

Heart of Imagery
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Course “Top Up” |
Kitless Character Creation $30,00 USDHeart of Imagery $30,00 USDStory Hooks $10,00 USD |

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Single assignment €3,00 EURAll assignments €15,00 EURRepeat assignment €2,00 EUR |
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Kitless Character Creation Heart of Imagery |


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Story Hooks
If you didn’t pay the full price of $25 for access to Story Hooks, and you want feedback on either or both of the assignments, please buy the course top-up in the payment section above. Make sure you select the right course! For Story Hooks, there’s no need to pay for individual assignments.
Story Hooks Workshop
The story hooks workshop is an exclusive one-on-one coaching session where I will take you through the process of finding your hook and deploying it in the first chapter of your book.
The workshop is a four stage process:
- first I will need a detailed outline of your book, and the first three chapters (if you have written them).
- next we will have a 90 minute call to discuss your options and strategy
- next you will rewrite your opening chapter, applying the principles of hooking
- finally, I will provide you with feedback and advice on your new opening chapter, to make it even more effective.
If you were dishonest, you could just do the workshop, make a killer first chapter, and sell more books.
To reserve your exclusive Story Hooks Workshop, Click Here: As soon as your payment clears I will contact you with more details.
